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CAHSEE ELA 3.3 Writing Strategies. Which of the substitutions would improve the underlined portion of sentence 4?
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Sorry And here's your shmoop du jour brought to you
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by donkeys Some call them stubborn But we respect them
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for sticking to their views All right Checking the following
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passage All right Which of the substitution Sze would improve
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the underlined portion of sentence for and here the potential
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answers All right Well the first step here is take
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another look at the sentence in question In the eighteen
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twenty eight election the republican candidate tried to smear his
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opponent and referred to him insultingly as a donkey though
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he used a different word Well yeah this looks a
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little wordy it's clear that we can cut choice d
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which suggests that we leave everything as is because all
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is not well in denmark Here answer b tells us
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to snip the parenthetical entirely and it also takes out
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the part about the donkey reference being insulting Well if
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we did this the readers would miss the point that
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the republicans used um or offensive version of the word
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donkey Joyce a misses the point in the same way
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as be parenthetical and a bit about the slur being
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insulting or both cut Also comparing a person to a
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thing isn't quite the same as referring to that person
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as being the thing moving on our best choices See
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putting donkey in quotation marks implies that the republican candidate
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used the other word for donkey which we all know
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is a bit more insulting Incidentally the american donkey lee
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has recently started a campaign against anyone using the lightness
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of a burrow in a derogatory manner This sort of 00:01:45.538 --> [endTime] insulting exploitation just has to stop
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