How we cite our quotes: (line)
Quote #1
Among the rain
and lights (lines 1-2)
So many things happen simultaneously in the poem, but they are revealed to us one by one. For example, what is the effect of putting the detail "and lights" on a separate line from "the rain," if these two things go together?
Quote #2
firetruck
moving
tense (lines 6-8)
In the middle of the poem, you find this tension between movement and frozen time. The fire truck is "moving," but its motion is "tense," like a contracted muscle. Time condenses in the middle of the poem. The lines are shorter, which means you generally read this section more slowly.