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CAHSEE ELA Writing: Punctuation Drill 5, Problem 1. Fix this sentence.
CAHSEE ELA Writing: Punctuation. Drill 5, Problem 3. How should this sentence be corrected, if at all?
CAHSEE ELA Writing Section: Punctuation Drill 5, Problem 4. How should the underlined portion be corrected, if at all?
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CAHSEE ELA Writing: Punctuation. Drill 5, Problem 3. How should this sentence be corrected, if at all?
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- 00:03
Here's an unshmoopy question you'll find on the exam...
- 00:07
What should replace the underlined portion of the below sentence, if anything?
- 00:12
The president wanted to cut the budget: his advisors didn't think it was a good idea.
- 00:18
And here are the potential answers:
- 00:25
Okay, so this question wants to test our colon knowledge.
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- 00:28
It's okay -- no medical expertise necessary. Is the sentence correct as is?
- 00:36
Nope. The first and second half of the sentence are two separate thoughts.
- 00:43
If the second part explained why the president wanted to cut the budget...
- 00:46
...or elaborated on what exactly was cut, then it might be okay.
- 00:51
But since the sentence switches gears at the midway point, we can eliminate D
- 00:55
What about the semi-colon in choice A?
- 00:58
Yeah, looks about right. The semi-colon is perfect for splitting up sentences where both
- 01:02
halves would make sense on their own.
- 01:04
Just to check 'em out... B would be wrong because it's a run-on...
- 01:11
...and C would be wrong because it uses an incorrect coordinating conjunction. In other
- 01:15
words, "so" makes zero sense here. So our answer is A.
- 01:18
As in, "Anesthetic."
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