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Description:
Conclusions. What's effective other than just like writing "The End"? That vital grade-driving final sentence needs to be powerful and loop in the theme or what you're trying to convey in the whole essay. So do it. The end.
Transcript
- 00:03
Okay Snipers last one in the series of eleven celebrating
- 00:06
neil armstrong and buzz and eagle You know things are
- 00:11
not as plans even be smooth but then looks movement
- 00:14
going Finally after two and a half is he's only
- 00:16
time to go All right Which sense Most effectively concludes
Full Transcript
- 00:22
the essay went last sentence of the whole thing The
- 00:25
long day was done but the eagle was gnome or
- 00:27
rest Um kind of weird No more rest ful What
- 00:32
What is that I'd say they were back in the
- 00:35
eagle Not on tiny cabin noise home him and sound
- 00:37
sound sound kind of legend but that goes no more
- 00:40
rescue Just sounds like a weird phrasing like old timey
- 00:43
british thing that's kind of out of context In the
- 00:46
whole essay here We're trying to make you sensitive to
- 00:48
these little subtle things because well that's basically what you're
- 00:51
being tested on All right Well the essay starts with
- 00:54
sleep mentions sleep a couple of times in the middle
- 00:57
and even has a title that instant the idea of
- 01:00
sleep or lack thereof on that's a bad thing a
- 01:04
sleep reference is therefore a nice and tidy way to
- 01:07
circular early include the passage it's also a way to
- 01:11
signal that the narrative has ended The astronauts will finally
- 01:15
reach that elusive goal of sleeping right like four weddings
- 01:18
and a funeral he always one end in a funeral
- 01:21
and a death and or a birthright That's how movies
- 01:23
work well so that's it so it's deep it was
- 01:26
time to go home to earth for a good night's
- 01:29
sleep Yeah that sounds reasonable It's the end All right
- 01:33
Loserville one's ending with a sleepless eagle leaves the narrative
- 01:36
open It also leaves the astronauts still in space Now
- 01:39
if you're doing this is a movie you would end
- 01:41
with a of course because it leaves it open for
- 01:43
a sequel When the alien grabs this ship and says
- 01:46
in space no one can hear you scream and then
- 01:48
everyone screams right Well for the story to be complete
- 01:51
we need to know even indirectly that well the astronauts
- 01:54
will return to earth and that they will sleep for
- 01:57
chance to dream eerie sunlight in the here has similar
- 02:00
unfinished effect on the narrative talking about the astronauts duty
- 02:04
in a paragraph about a restless journey back to earth
- 02:08
comes out of nowhere Plus we were never told what
- 02:11
their duty was in the first place No it's not 00:02:14.423 --> [endTime] that kind of duty
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