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Okay cite editing shmoop er's Last sentence in this section

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shedding its leaves annually The oak is a decent jewess

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tree that is found throughout the northern hemisphere All right

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we're going to rewrite this thing with a decision tree

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comma what i want to do All right without the

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comma after tree a number of the answer choices here

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would sound great however much like mosquitoes bedbugs and standardized

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tests we can't get rid of the kama oh that

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easily Instead we need to work with it The claws

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disingenuous tree is describing the oak tree which means it

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needs to be as close as possible to the noun

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it modifies the oak sheds It's is the only choice

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that fits so disingenuous tree comma The oak tree sheds

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its leaves blah blah blah blah can't follow a comma

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with a relative pronoun that as an a or b

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and found like indie won't work either We need to

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go straight to the independent claws so that's it The 00:01:06.613 --> [endTime] oak tree sheds it's shmoop pasta maybe that's it

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