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Learn about effective language use from austronauts that like hoarding moon rocks in this SAT writing drill!
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SAT Writing and Language Drill 4.4 Effective Language Use 5 Views
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Ever heard of Trumbull's painting? This SAT Writing video goes over the artistic side of Revolutution.
Transcript
- 00:02
Okay Shmoop er's four of eleven in the trumbull siri's
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here Question Which choice provides the most specific description of
- 00:08
trouble painting Most pathetic going with him And we underlining
- 00:11
right there A siri's to document the beginning of the
- 00:14
country Let's go back the paragraph there and we're going
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- 00:18
to cruise down here So you got a cleaning cart
- 00:20
version and you know a lot about blocking the american
- 00:22
continent A great part of a series to document the
- 00:23
beginning of the country already working with accuracy for aesthetic
- 00:26
into picking his little scenes So he's not all that
- 00:28
accurate That's Interesting So we gotta probably change something it's
- 00:31
going to be not just about documenting the beginning of
- 00:35
the country It's more something else It's Revolutionary era That
- 00:39
should probably be a hint that probably through the d
- 00:42
office that here so it's either b or c So
- 00:44
let's think here from the first paragraph we know that
- 00:46
the revolution being referred to is the american variety Yes
- 00:50
it's not the russian one There was no saar no
- 00:52
screaming of the devil or the rolling stones singing about
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when it comes to revolutions who's doing the revolting is
- 00:59
important and no they're not revolting that guy's revolting but
- 01:03
they're not So american is just as important as revolution
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They have to stand on equal footing like they're socialists
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away Bad example revolution is a popular thing For a
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while Everybody was doing it Yeah can you hear the
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people sing Yeah it was a big one in france
- 01:17
they had better songs than we did well We can
- 01:19
infer from the rest of the essay that the country
- 01:21
a is the u s but it's better to give
- 01:24
the detail outright Specifying the time period is slightly more
- 01:28
informative but still too vague because it doesn't really clarify
- 01:31
exactly which country we're talking about It's Better to include
- 01:34
the word revolution since there were other revolutions in the
- 01:38
eighteenth century i'm really a cool theatrical one so we're
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not there Okay so the answer is c a serious 00:01:44.291 --> [endTime] to document the american revolution
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