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Learn about effective language use from austronauts that like hoarding moon rocks in this SAT writing drill!
What's the whole essay about? How does time control or matter to the essay as a whole?
This SAT Writing videos goes over when to keep or ditch an extra sentence.
SAT Writing & Language: Sentence Transitions at the Beginning of an Essay 16 Views
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What's the whole essay about? How does time control or matter to the essay as a whole?
Transcript
- 00:02
all right people we're starting the SAT
- 00:05
writing section of our SAT prep [Woman writing on school desk]
- 00:08
lucky you yeah here we go so we got 11
- 00:11
of these bad boys and for each question
- 00:13
you're gonna choose the answer that best
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- 00:15
improves the writing quality or makes
- 00:17
the writing adhere to standard written
- 00:19
English conventions no Klingon from you
- 00:23
Bob in the back there some questions
- 00:25
include a no change choice and that's
- 00:27
just fine if it's perfect the way it is
- 00:29
so let's start by just kind of skimming
- 00:31
this thing so we kind of get a sense for
- 00:35
what they're doing here... [mumbling sped up]
- 00:41
all right we're just gonna skip down to
- 00:43
the question....
- 00:44
Advanced composites
- 00:48
such as carbon fiber are three times as
- 00:50
strong in twice as light as the lightest
- 00:52
metals currently they're used for
- 00:54
expensive applications like satellites [Man opens car door]
- 00:56
and luxury cars the first paragraph sets
- 00:59
up the rest of the essay which is about
- 01:00
a new Institute working on advanced
- 01:02
composite whoo-hoo we're gonna need some
- 01:05
context before we can care about these [Man browsing through book shelf]
- 01:07
materials however the sentence that
- 01:09
begins with currently tells us what's
- 01:12
going on now right now in the world of
- 01:14
advanced composites but be there read
- 01:17
suggest a contrast there's no contrast
- 01:19
nevertheless and though also implies
- 01:21
some kind of opposition and it's not [Although and nevertheless wrestling]
- 01:23
really like they're in that kind of
- 01:24
fragmented and we really don't like
- 01:26
fragments so that's it it looks like
- 01:29
it's no change and yes the answer is a
- 01:31
no change sort of like when you buy a
- 01:34
hot dog from a street vendor and [5 dollar bill switching hands]
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