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Which of the following details would best support the author's purpose if inserted after sentence 9 in the passage?
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here analyzing this fine piece of writing It's critical to
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understand how to properly dispose of and recycle electronic kiosks
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available Mp three players Boy was written a long time
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ago And place your ban if you agree to sell
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the product right let's get down the question here in
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context Which of the following details would best support the
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author's purpose if inserted after sentenced nine in the passage
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and reproduced below this thing they're going to insert that
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after sentence nine was quickly Go up there and look
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at sentence nine food come after this All right From
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your electric toothbrush to your tv remote your children's animated
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toys each day your family uses a lot of batteries
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Okay then it would be inserted Right So let's think
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about this Well we've got some choices here In fact
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every year americans row out almost I mean batteries Ok
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Yeah That's reasonable between cellphone tablet computer of the wound
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and the average twenty for electron Tobi that relevant All
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right most people don't realize and you waste offenders and
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something dry cell batteries using consumer electronics All right well
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we really have had to skin this passage carefully to
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come up with the right answer Right So if you
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see these answer choices and you're going home what is
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this Go back and re skim and skim again Kind
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of Like the milk well details make excellent support for
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ideas related to an author's purpose Choosing the correct detail
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The fifth purpose can be tricky The author's purpose here
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is to inform the reader about recycling and convince him
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or her that it's easy and responsible to dio We
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want a detail that builds upon or supports the purpose
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right Well the only detail that informs the reader about
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recyclable items and fits with previous sense is the one
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that mentions one hundred eighty thousand tonnes of batteries that
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americans throw out each year Thank you Hell on musk
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that makes us sit up and notice the other choices
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Provide information about topic but lonely There Don't forget the
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author's purpose or fit in his follow up to the
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sense So just kind of there They're like good not
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directly related and this is kind of a gut feel
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things so it was not an easy one but the 00:02:06.49 --> [endTime] answer is a that said shmoop
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