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All right sy reading troopers last in this section here

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on the fast food and high schools being mashed up

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with well i guess with mash sewn ordinarily school i'm

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gonna salad bar and the customers today many parents and

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uncertain about fast food nutrition Well in the last paragraph

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indian incorporating fast choices many love above okay Question In

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context which word or phrase provides the best transition for

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the beginning of sense Eighteen You're right to this one

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Many schools and districts are suffering budget cuts and lack

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of proper funding huh Not a great sense there All

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right so let's think about this Well we don't need

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to click our ruby red editing pen three times praying

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to get back to kansas to get from here to

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there and writing a handy transition Will dio teo solve

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the problems of moving from one idea to the next

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On the other hand suits our purposes nicely cb right

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there give it reveals the idea like the wizard behind

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the curtain by providing the transition from the writers supported

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the claim that schools should partner with fast food restaurants

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and sell out their souls the corporate america and the

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man to the counter argument that well people might be

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concerned about nutrition Gdf thinking you know it's in a

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big mac Okay well that's it so we'd be in

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the loser bowl here Well way aren't ready for a

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conclusion just yet So get rid of egg and there's

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Nothing traditional about the new idea of letting kids eat

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Mickey d's in the high school cafeteria finally doesn't provide

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the right kind of contrast between the supporting evidence of

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the previous paragraph to the presentation the counter arguments So

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get rid of me So yeah that's it it's B 00:01:49.424 --> [endTime] we're shmoop yeah we'll take fries with that

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