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Which of the following sentences is best to insert between sentences 11 and 12?


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All right see reading shmoop last in the series Number

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five here Obviously you have rick's altering the maintained because

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i stayed in my email visit in your charming job

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My husband i went there and don't make him a

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one ton of been like in context Which of the

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following sentences is best to insert between sentences eleven and

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twelve right here So we're going to put this thing

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in between eleven and twelve I called north shore animal

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league the next day I was very upset All right

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we'll simply stating that mona spoke with the adoption counsellor

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about the issue it's perfectly no muss no fuss and

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most importantly no repetition Yeah so that's where it should

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go is between eleven and twelve way don't like to

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repeat ourselves We repeat we don't like to repeat ourselves

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saying the same thing over and over and over again

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since eleven tells us that mona called the north shore

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animal league sends twelve tells us that she was very

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upset but we already know both of these things so

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there's no need to repeat him like a and c

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would have ugo repetitions Not the only issue here though

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as we also want to insert a sense that maintains

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the same tone and voices sentences around it So get

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rid of bia's Well that's just weird so the answer

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is d i spoke with the adoption counselor about this

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issue between sentences Eleven well get your shoehorn and shove 00:01:28.266 --> [endTime] it right in there

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